So i just finished the last page of chapter 1 and i wanted to give my own comments and tell you some details for the future chapters as well.

This comic was supposed to have more realistic artstyle and darker writing. It included more dramatic scenes as well, and this all makes me feel that i could have done a better job. I had to turn this into a more cartoony story, just for the fact that i didnt have the skill level of an artist from MARVEL or DC comics.

Im not disappointed in myself or the comic, i just know that with more time and space i could fully express myself.

So ive decided to improve for chapter 2. Ive already made some re-designs for some characters, practiced new styles and fleshed out the story even further. This makes me excited to start making the next chapter. As for the release for that.. I'm not so sure. I want to take a break for the summer. I want to practice my skills even higher and try new things. I can promise that the first page will be ready for some time in september, maybe even earlier if i somehow manage to spend my whole vacation sitting at my PC drawing stuff.. i doubt.

I also want to speed up the comic a bit. I feel like i could have made chapter 1 faster and gotten longer pages out more frequently. Im gonna aim for 10 frame pages in the next chapter and try to keep it weekly. I will have to get multiple pages ready for it to remain weekly so im not going to rush myself this time.

Thank you for reading the comic! Have a nice summer!